Well this is cute, but is lacking something... I can't say what exactly. Still funny though. I just can't imagine what would happen if that alicorn jetpack princess would do if she had a student? Try to teach her about sorcery or the art of handling jetpacks. Sorcery is different from the Magic of Friendship... in that it sounds more cooler and has some more cooler stuff in it. The student suuuurely don't have to look like twilight. Just make her student into a different color, like pink!!! Surely no one will notice?
But otherwise... great job! I hope to see more from you in the future!